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Today, many people take it for
granted that some people think that graded match of sports lead to equivalent
sport games between ages and culture without any discriminations. However,
others believe that sporting competitions make some defaults to parties and
nations. In this essay, i will explain both views one by one, and then give my
own opinion at the end.
Initially, the former point is
based on the fact that sporting events help people to be together at that time.
Such as World cup. Actually, all of the nations love to watch and play the
soccer. And, there is no violent situation during World cup. Also, it is great
opportunity to enjoy diversity of other cultures when people visit to other
countries which planning to open the sporting events. For instance, according
to articles, people plan to learn other languages to participate the local
society before go to overseas. Consequently, they will be more joyful with
sporting events from abroad. Therefore, it is worthwhile to do competition of
sports.
On the contrary, there is
another point is that competition of sports make some problems to parties and
nations. Because, people have very emotional gene. So, if they failed their
games, they will be upset when they get horrible outcomes. In other words,
there are lots of sports fan who has uncontrolled feelings called hooligans. In
my own case, i saw them after finish their losing game. They looked so violent
and keep saying bad words in relation to last match. Besides, one of fans
almost fighted with opposite fans. Furthermore, i read one of articles, it
mentioned it happened a civil war in South America, because of soccer match
several years ago. This is why, competitive sports lead to problems.
In conclusion, based on the
explanation, i would like to support the latter view. Because, competition
makes too much trouble between people. So, i suggest that people need to play
only friendly match without competition.
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