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Many scientists say that we (여기의 경우 밑의 in my opinion 과는 달리 1인칭을 사용하는 것이 필수가 아닌 상황이므로 꼭 대체해주세요~혹시 어떻게 하는지 모르신다면 댓글 주시면 설명드리겠습니다.) already live in
old society and this will be more severe and cause some cause severe problems at work. Thus, some Some
people think that the appropriate standard of retirement age should be
increased. In my opinion, the age of retirement should be definitely higher for
the future because people’s thoughts and health keep changing along with the
developing society.
To begin with, old people nowadays are
healthy enough to still work. As the medical industry today has been highly developed, people’s
life spans are extended, and are also predicted that they can live up to 100
years in the near future. Unlike the past, there are a number of healthy people
who are over sixty these days. Therefore, they are sufficiently able to work
even after a few decades. In this sense, the age of retirement would be better
to be inclined in the old society.
On top of that, compared to the past, people’s awareness is became
different today. Many people living in this society that people are getting
older change to think about the definition of one’s later year from taking
rests in a peaceful way to working longer actively. (이 문장은 살짝 꼬였는데, 어떤 의미로 적어주셨는지 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) For example, some old labourers
who worked for their almost entire lives are rather depressed after retirement
and some of them restart to work in other workplaces. Consequently, according
to old workers’ opinion in terms of retirement, countries should give a chance
for them to work longer.
To sum up, since people can have are expected to have a longer
life expectancy, the criteria of the age about retirement should be raised significantly. The reason is because Because they are highly likely to work in a healthy way (건강한 방법으로 일하는 것이 아닌, 그 나이에도 건강하게 일하는 것으로 바꿔주세요~) and there are more
people who are willing to work longer even though they are quite old. |