International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity? (topic: increasing tourism activity)
It is true that the cost of air travel overseas is decreasing and tour industries is prosperous. There are a wide range of benefits and drawbacks about growth of tour businesses.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that increased tourism could have negative effects on a country in many aspects. Firstly, tourist attractions could be harmed because of a considerable number of people who visit national sites. For example, there are reports that some travelers deliberately throw their trash or vandalize outdoor heritage monuments. Secondly, local people could suffer from disturbing noise which tourists make when traveling to private areas like traditional village district. Thus the residents continuously complain that tourists annoy their daily lives. Finally, tourist spots can be full with problems such as high cost of prices and even theft due to many visitors.
On the other hand, I believe that boosted tourism have beneficial impacts on individuals and countries. Travel could offer many chances for exchanging of culture and ideas. When a variety of ideas mix with each other, it would result in change of people's lives such as living standard and the way of thinking. Moreover, tourism will create many job opportunities to people as travelers spend money on shopping and various leisure activities. In the same way, the economy of nations which have a number of visitors is bolstered as more hotels, shopping malls or leisure facilities are built for the tourists. For instance, the national income of Singapore and Dubai are heavily dependent on tourism businesses.
In conclusion, the low price of international air flight can raise countries' economy, and it could affect society and nations in both beneficial and detrimental ways.
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