The given table illustrates the performance
five distinct criteria for three different branches located in Vancouver in 2016.
Overall,
it is clear that the figures of the branch in Georgia Street show the highest sales
performance in every sector for transaction. Meanwhile, the menu which was preferable in each restaurant
branch was varied. (이 문장의 경우, 여기에 '하지만, 치킨을 재료로 삼는 것은 공통이었다.' 라고 넣어주시면 되고, 대신 바로 뒷 문장은 밑으로 내려주시면 됩니다.) Georgia Street’s best menu was chicken burger and that for
Dunsmuir Street was chicken wings and customers in Drake Streets prefer chicken
pasta.
Looking
at the graph in more detail, the best performer was the branch in Georgia
Street with 854 transactions and 10.69 dollars for transaction value on average.
While the number of transactions in Dunsmuir Street was higher than that for
Drake Street as 360, the average transaction value in Drake Street was bigger than
the branch in Dunsmuir Street with 9.02 and 5.61 dollars respectively.
Meanwhile,
the average transaction for eat-in and take-away in Georgia Street and Dunsmuir
Street showed a similar pattern. In other words, customers prefer to take-away
with 449 for Georgia Street and 392 for Dunsmuir Street. However, customers who
visited the branch in Drake Street like to eat-in with 200 surpassing
transaction of take-away by 10.
총평: 표현상으로 크게 문제는 없었는데, 내용상 문제의 경우 표가 액박으로 떠서 봐드리지를 못했네요ㅠㅠ위에 적어드린 사항 외에 내용상 문제가 겉으로 봤을 때는 없어보이지만, 그래도 표를 정확히 첨부해서 댓글 달아주시면 확인하고 추가적으로 봐드리겠습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)