Your Answer ▼ Recently, a great deal of people decide to be work for self-employed rather than a company or organisation, because people are concerning more about the value of private time these days. However, running an own business is more complicated than working for a company due to some reasons.
As time goes by, company’s culture is getting hard to follow for the young generations. It is easily found in a developing country, such as Korea. Young workforces in Korea, especially who were born in the 90’s, raised in which is an economically stabled period compared to their parents’ generation, are raised in full of love by parents, think more humanitarian ways, and concern what is reasonable. Due to their attitudes, elders treat them as selfish and a loser who do not have patience patient, however, the young generation do not really care about what the elderly think are not really care about their opinion, and find their own way out of companies.
It is true that they (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 작성되어서는 안 됩니다.) are not patient, and quite selfish. The personality was changed, and they would find more profit job like running own business. Though it is the better way for themselves, it would bring a much tougher future to them, (여기까지, 즉 서설에 해당하는 부분이 너무 깁니다. 단점 자체에 더 집중해주세요~) if they are not ready for face to the reality. According to the researches, only less than 5% of people who quitted the job from company and are self-employed, answered that they are financially satisfied with their current situation. Most of people underestimated the business industry, and now they are already frustrated to pay the loan.
To sum up, people are wanting freedom more and more, and eventually a plenty of people decided to leave their company and have their own company. Unfortunately, only a few people could escape from the stress which came from financial problem.
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