■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

The given diagrams depict the current floor plan and a proposed floor layout of the house. There are several noticeable changes such as major changes in the centre part of the existing plans. Including some additional features. (여기는 비문이죠. 와사비님 실력 고려했을 때 모르고 틀렸다기보다는 실수이지만, 여튼 와사비님은 이런 식의 비문이 종종 나는 편이므로 주의해주세요! 아마 왜 비문인지 아시겠지만, 혹시 어떻게 수정해야 할지 모르시겠다면 댓글 주세요~)

Looking at the diagrams more closely,  one can see that some parts of the house are going to remain the same as before, such as the entrance door, the living room, the kitchen. Unlike these,  the middle part of the house almost will go through almost complete changes. The place of the internal door will be moved next to the left side of the internal wall.  If you (2인칭은 쓰지 마세요! 굳이 2인칭 없이도 충분히 글을 만들 수 있습니다.) go inside through the door, there will be some kitchen furniture, which is a new feature. By eliminating the right side of the wall, it will give more space to the living room area. The current hall area will be combined as part of the living room.  The place of the wall and the stairs will be changed to new stairs, but without the original storage underneath it. 

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7점 선에서 크게 문제가 있는 글은 아니긴 한데, 위에서도 표시해드렸듯이 와사비님의 경우 가끔 저렇게 불완전한 문장이 나는데, 이 습관은 꼭 고쳐주세요! 이번 글에는 하나밖에 없어서 괜찮았다만, 한 글에 3~4번 날 경우 점수에 타격이 갑니다.

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