Films
can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned
about another country from watching its movies?
It
has been observed that people are able to acquire certain information about the
regions which are photographed as backgrounds in the movies. It is true that
foregrounds, environments and even some small objects are often treated important
functions. In accordance with this trend, viewers are able to know
some specific geographical and climatic features. In addition, they can also learn
about special culture and traditions. It is mainly because, the majority of them
were created according to culture and tradition of the country. Thus, people are able to learn various information about the country when it is depicted is in the films through movies. (빨간 부분이 거의 없는 것을 통해 볼 수 있듯이 지금 표현상 문제는 거의 없다고 봐도 무방합니다. 그러나 내용 쪽이 문제가 되는데, 이에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
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총평: 만약에 지금 논제의 두 번째 문장이 What can people learn about other countries from watching its movies? 라고 되어있었으면 지금 글은 엄청 좋은 점수를 받았을 겁니다. 그러나 현재 논제는 그렇게 되어있지 않죠.
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