As the intelligent technology continues to be
developed, the day will come when computers are even smarter than human beings.
Some people argue whether or not this development is positive or negative
effect to human beings. Personally, if we restrict the functional capacity of programs
and robots, the lives of human will be more convenient.
Those who believe that the development of intelligent
technology will have negative impact on our lives often cite the rise of unemployment.
The robots and the computers perform tasks more efficiently and rapidly than
humans do (이런 사소한 msg를 치면서 글자수를 늘려주시면 됩니다.), so the industries will become automated. However, there will be other
new jobs such as programing and assembling the robots. The new occupations can
resolve the rising of unemployment. (이 내용은 결론이나 밑의 문단으로 내려주시면 되고, 여기는 그냥 부정적인 것 자체에만 온전히 집중해주시면 됩니다.)
On the other hand, if intelligent
technology evolves to the point where computers are much smarter than us, we
could have several positive changes. First, the robots will do the household chores
instead, so people can take more leisure time with family and friends than before.
Second, the medical treatment will be developed. The computers and robots will assist
human beings to develop a medicine of numerous infectious diseases, as we could prevent
the illness rapidly.
In my opinion, even though there are
problems of increasing intelligent computers, we should develop the programs to
make the human lives convenient and beneficial. But (문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) one thing, we need to place
limits on potential power and functional capacity of the machine to some degree.