■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

▶ Topic : The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

▶ Your Answer :

This table show the percentage of consumer expenditure by three categories at particular countries in 2002. The three categories are Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education.

First of all, all countries spend the biggest portion of spending long time on Food/Drinks/Tobacco, from 15.77% in Sweden to 32.14% in Turkey>> 이 부분에서 from A to B의 형태는 적절치 않습니다 in Sweden at 15.77% and Turkey at 32.14% 정도가 좋습니다. Turkey's expenditure proportion of that is almost over twice as likely as that of Swden's. And>> And Or Also But So 는 문두에 어울리지 않습니다 Moreover 라고 써주세요 Ireland spend the second greatest  proportion spend 시간 돈 노력 on ing 의 형태가 문법의 기본 형태입니다 on Food/Drinks/Tobacco, and the gab between the other countries is considerably narrow.

Secondly, however, in Clothing/Footwear part, Italy has by far the most biggest proportion, comparing to other countries. Ireland, Spain and Turkey use in had similarly portion of expenditure on Clothing/Footwear, while Sweden spent more less money on that.

Finally in the Leisure/Education category, all population spend their money just under 5% of their total budget. Significantly, the gab is located between Turkey and Spain >> 콤마 빼주시기 바랍니다 없어도 전치사가 문두로 나가지 않으면 안 쓰시는 것이 맞습니다at 4.35% and 1.98% respectively.

Overall, the five countries in the task question spent the biggest portion of their budget on Food/Drinks/Tobacco and the smallest percentage on Leisure/Education.

 2002년에 관한 내용이므로 시제는 과거로 작성해야 합니다

거의 대부분의 동사 시제가 틀렸습니다

또한 category가 나오면 이미 문제에서 언급된 내용이기에 the를 붙여야 합니다

시험기간이라 꾸준히 못해드리는 점 죄송합니다

Task Achievement - 6
Coherence and Cohesion - 6
Lexical Resource - 5
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 4

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