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Nowadays, the Earth 지구는 대문자로 시작합니다 earth는 토양 등을 말합니다 is called as a ‘global village’. It means the world is getting becoming >> get 동사는 좋지 않습니다 뜻이 많아 어휘를 죽이는 단어입니다 much easier to communicate with each other. After the Internet Internet역시 I는 대문자로 씁니다 invented, there were more chances emerge more chances have been emerged to talk with foreign people. Therefore, learning foreign language becomes a massive trend in the whole world. Lots of >> 사실 lots of 가 구어체에서 사용하기 편하게 만든거라고 들었습니다 a lot of 혹은 many 등으로 사용해주세요 education systems focused on teaching international communication skills.
After some periods period는 s 를 붙이지 않습니다, problem has occurred, most parents were extremely competitive to each other for educating their own children. At begin, children learned a foreign language at secondary school. But So Also But And Or 모두 문두에 쓰지 않습니다 (아카데믹한 글의 경우) some parents want to taught their own children at primary school, so that they could learn language one step ahead than their own ages. Even some experts believe that learning foreign language at young age is much beneficial for children. What could be advantages and disadvantages for studying foreign language at young age in childhood?
On the one hand on one hand 혹은 on the other hand가 맞습니다, it might be harmful for to start to take foreign language courses at youth. Firstly, children could be confused about using mother tongue language with second language. It would be possible to be happened, that they cannot use properly any language properly. Secondly, due to attending enormous number of academy, learning another subject would give them pressure even more.
On the other hand, learning foreign language at young age could be a great opportunity for children. When they were young, >> when이 문두에 나오면 콤마로 나눠주셔야 합니다 they have more abilities to learning, especially in languages. So making environments for studying foreign language to the young brings affect massive benefits for their international communication skilsl. Moreover, using foreign language gave an opportunity to make global friends. Learning language is not only a linguistic matter, but also matter of studying new culture and exotic atmosphere. It would help child to grow up as an open-minded adult.
In conclusion, it is impossible to ignore the trend to become international society. However, it is indeed that, current youth young people are already under a huge stress. Therefore, as a solution, at young age, we provide them a lot of chances to be exposed to foreign language, so that they could feel interesting on it. After that, adding mandatory foreign language class at primary school for senior students.>> 동사가 없습니다
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