▶ Your Answer :
The data illustrates the
change for fish and meat consumption in Europe between 1979 and 2004. Looking
at the graph, there are four categories which include chicken, beef, lamb, and
fish.
In 1979, a person ate 230
grams of beef per week, which is the largest portion of all, per week. It was followed by lamb and chicken
with about 150 grams. Fish was consumed 60 grams, which is significantly low.
However, it had dramatically changed dramatically for 25 years until 2004.
Chicken had been fluctuated >> 콤마 빼주세요
but the general trend was upward. It had been risen from 140 to 250 grams. On the
other hand, lamb was negatively correlated with chicken. It had There are fluctuations but it
had been noticeably dropped noticeably. It declined from 150 to 60 grams. The largest
consumption, beef, also had been fallen from 203 to 100 grams. Meanwhile, fish
had been slightly decreased but there were not big changes.
To sum up, beef, which is the
highest figure in 1979, >> 콤마입니다 became the second popular meat in Europe in 2004.
Chicken and lamb were consumed at the same level but they went different
directions >> they showed different trends. Finally, chicken was on the top in 2004, >> 콤마 넣어주세요 while lamb went down and
ranked on the third place. Fish is remained the bottom of the graph.
remain은 수동태가 될 수 없습니다 또한 모든 동사가 오류입니다 had pp는 과거의 어떤 시점부터 어떤 시점까지 모르는 경우를 나타냅니다 지금은 년도가 주어진 표이기 때문에 알 수가 있어서 그냥 단순한 과거 동사로 작성 될 글이며 콤마의 사용에 주의해주시기 바랍니다 부사는 동사 뒤에 위치하며 어떤 것을 말하고 문장을 완성한 후 몇 그램이다 라는 문장을 다시 쓸 경우 두 문장을 연결할 어휘나 문법을 알지 못한다는 인식을 얻습니다
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 5.5 예상합니다 |