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The survey given provides an information on
airline passengers' preferences of important in flight consideration to four 4 different categories by sex and age in
the year 2002
First of all, the general trend can be
observed easily. The customers of the airline company put their importance in the order of on
seat/leg room, attendant service, meals/drinks, and moves/in-flight
entertainment in sequence.
However, if we look into closely, differences between sex and ages can be found. Firstly, in terms of sex, women passengers are
regard meal/drinks and attendant service more important than men regardless of age groups. To
be specific, total 57 females those who survey picked meals/drinks and 64
females picked attendant service as their most important considerations while
only 48 and 53 males picked the above services respectively. Secondly, in terms of
age, older passengers are tend to favor seat/leg room and meal/drinks while
younger passengers prefer attendant service and movies/in-flight entertainment.
For example, with regards to attendant service, only 56 old men aged more than
45 among those who surveyed picked this category as their most important factor in
considering arilne while 63 young passengers thought it is the most important
feature.
In conclusion, we can suggest to airline companies that, if they want to attract more passengers, they should take care
of seat/leg rooms with different approach to its targeted passengers. <(not necessary information)
Score: 7.5 Comment: 잘 서술 해주셨습니다. 다만 spelling에 주의를 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 쓰시는 표현 또한 많이 repetitive 합니다. regards라는 표현 조금 자제 해주시고 다른 표현을 조금 더 다양하게 써주시면 좋습니다. 다양한 표현을 쓸 수 있는 것도 점수에 들어 갑니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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