Some business observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seen to lack interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues
What could be the reason for this? What solutions can help address this problem?
It is a common belief that new laborers who just graduated from an university tend to lack bring the less communication skills, and this situation affects to working efficiency negatively. This essay will deal with the reason of the above happening, and also provide an obvious solution about it.
Basically, many people that involved workers started to decrease their interpersonal abilities (여기는 능동이 아닌 수동으로 적어주셔야 합니다. 자기들이 스스로 감소시키지는 않죠.) after the spread of electronic communication devices. Because of those things we (1인칭은 웬만하면 최소화해주세요~현재 글 내에 무조건 들어가야 하는 1인칭은 존재하지 않습니다.) could arrange a lot of tasks quickly, while we have been losing our communication time by facing with others. Decrease of communication time brings us the nerf of our social skills, and the above situation is the consequence of it. Thus, our part method (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) only for focusing on the efficiency made today's communicating skills' shortage.
Nevertheless, we have an effective strategy to solve the problem nowadays and it is called expanding the ceminar and workshop. The main reason ('무엇에 대한 이유인지' 를 적어주셔야 합니다. 항상 핵심에 대한 꾸준한 상기가 중요해요.) was the opportunity's shortage of communication with other people. Thus, if the time to communicate more is extended if extending the time to communicate more, workers these days can improve their interpersonal skills by sharing their plans with other colleagues, and we can expect the increase of the working efficiency. This is because more communications must bring the unity and it also enhances the teamwork. Therefore, companies have to encourage the communicating time by providing the scheme.
To conclude, the young workers' problem was the shortage of interpersonal abilities caused by lack of communicating time by facing with others. Hence, we have to give them an opportunity to talk with other employees and even executives to develop for developing their communication skills.
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