The given bar chart illustrates information on the rate of the profits made from the top in the rate of musicals and thriller. (여기는 실수로 잘못 작성하신 것 같네요~두 항목만 들어갈 이유가 없습니다.)
Overall, it is clear that the genres of comedy and animation were seen a continuous rise in profit rates whereas there are two figures that depicted a gradual decrease gradually over the given period. (그 항목이 뭔지를 밝혀야합니다.)
In detail, there were a steady increase in earnings (전체 수입이 늘었는지는 알 수 없습니다. 단지 그 비율이 증가한 것만 알 수 있죠. 물론 물가 상승 때문에 실제로는 오르긴 했을 겁니다. 그러나 이건 언제까지나 유추해석이에요.) of the type of animation and comedy to approximately 7 and 26 percent of the total profits percentage of profits over a decade. However, among them, the bigger gap between 1995 and 2005 was comedy movie at around 7 percentage of total earnings profits. In case of adventure movie, its figure showed a fluctuation fluctuated and then, it reached a paeck slight under 25 percentage of profits.
On the other hand, the figure for both action and drama continued droped to hit its lowest to about 13 and 15 percentage of profits. The rate of drama which accounted for 27 approximately plunged considerably and it bacame simialr that of action by 2005. Meanwhile, there were a small fluctuation in the rate of musicals and thriller.
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