Many
people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit
museums?
It
has been observed that museums are one of the tourist attractions to visitors. I
believe that the main reason is because that it is the easiest and fastest way of
learning different history. People have been exhibit their local remains to
want to preserve and promote them. Thus, tourists are able to experience the
other culture, tradition and things like that indirectly through various kinds
of relics of the past time displaying.
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1.First and foremost, they are able to get chances to build a special career and meet opportunities which is unrivaled like language study abroad through foreign language classes. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) -> 우선, 그들은 외국어 수업들로 특별한 커리어를 쌓을 수 있고, 유학 등 독보적인기회를 만들 수 있다. 이니까 문맥상 unrivaled experiences 가 맞을까요?
2.Among them, in companies, it is able to be satisfied of the employers as efficient technologies. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) -> 그 중, 회사에서, 그것(new technology)은 효율적 기술로써 고용주가 만족할 수 있다 인데..