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In current day, whether childeren have to do homework or not has aroused a debate. Some people assert that doing homework is responsibility of children whereas many others argue that advantages from homework does not surpass the disadvantages. Personally, I am in favour of the former view. (제가 해드린 것처럼, 문단을 나눌 때에는 엔터키를 두 번 쳐주시면 됩니다.)
Doing homework surely leads to high academic performance for the following reason. The primary reason we should take into consideration is that cognitive ability can be cultivated by doing homework. As By doing the task oneself or even with other’s help, children can grasp whether they know or not about the subject of homework. And (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.) it leads to the high cognitive ability, which is important factor in academic performance. Secondly, homework requires children to organize and control their time. Specifically, they need to manage the schedule of the daily life so that they could secure the time to spent in doing homework. Securing regular time and spending in studying is the another important factor for academic achievement.
Sure, some others may claim that due to the differences in individual child, uniform homework cannot ensure the improvement. Apparently, there are much differences depending on one’s nature and high academic performance can be achieved in the way that suit them the best. Even so, there is a room for improvement by doing assignment as they try out in a various way in order to complete the task, which mean that they can grasp whether it suits is suit for them or not. (얘는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
In summary, I would concede that uniform homework would not be an effective way to some children. Despite that, doing homework certainly support the children in a much better way. Overall, I am convinced that children have to do homework.
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