■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? |
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In recent years, people are likely to drop off stable jobs to start their own business rather than before. Even though there are so many variables like economic downturn, young adults readily pursue their motivation. It is not evident their decision is desirable or not so that this essay will examine both benefits and drawbacks of being self-employed. In one hand, someone who makes a challenge to be self-employed can get more flexible time management compared to an rather than ordinary worker. More specifically, an employee should spend their time doing specific tasks related to the company until break time. Additionally, they can get many opportunities to make a self-decision. For instance, people who make their own restaurant can decide all options ranging from its interior to menu design.
On the other hand, the more freedom someone gets, the more responsibility it causes. If someone who is are included in a company makes a mistake, there are so many helpful people including superior, companions in close. Meanwhile, people who are self-employed have to be in charge of all the things by themselves without coworkers. There is no exception in extraordinary situation like a pendamic.
To recapitulate, people should make decisions after considering whether they value stability or work-life balance. Additionally. before making final decisions, they should consider not only their personal temperament but also realistic elements like financial resource. Whatever decision they make, it would be better to make a choice that cause smaller regrets in the future. (얘는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: 6.0/9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | 5/9 | 6/9 | 7/9 | 6/9 |
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Comment ▼ 사실 지금 글은 절대 6.0으로 떨어질 건 아니었습니다. 초록 부분만 정상적으로 쓰셨더라도 6.5까지는 괜찮았을 거라 조금아쉽네요.
글을 쓸 때에는 철저히 논제가 요구한 바에 대해서만 적어주셔야 합니다. 지금 논제는 ~의 원인과 장점을 묻고 있습니다. 그러면 글 내내 그것만 적으면 되는데, 여기서 더 나아가서 요구되지도 않은 나만의 의견을 쓸 경우 월권행위가 됩니다. 이에 주의해주세요!
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목표 점수는7.0, 걸린 시간은 35분입니다! 감사합니다!!