▶ Your Answer : It is sometimes argued that currant celebrities get famous for their luxurious lifestyle and money rather than the work they do. While I partially agree with the opinion that it can have a harmful effect on youngsters, I believe that other well-known people set positive examples as well.
Clearly, some people get a fame easily through their enormous money that they inherit from their parents or get through marriage with the rich. Also, some celebrities flaunt their glamorous life patterns on gossip magazines or reality TV programs to be famous. The Children of successful businessmen or famous entertainers are good examples. They usually have a considerable asset which is inherited, live in extravagant villa, use branded products which cost an arm and a leg, and even achieve higher office positions simply without any hard works. This situation displayed on the mass media is often blamed since it can discourage young people’s will to succeed by effort.
However, I would say that it is just one part of many cases, and there are more celebrities who have a positive influence on children. Firstly, they gain their popularities through constant practices and efforts. In case of sports starts and well-known musicians who have tried to improve their abilities, their success stories inspire many children in a beneficial way. Secondly, even some people who become famous through wealth can set a good example to youngsters. To take an example of Su-jin Kim, who is an actor but more famous for his riches, he decided to donate the large portion of his asset to charity funds. His "Noblesse-Oblige" led his young fans to participating in donation, which is considered a good model of positive influence of celebrities.
In conclusion, I believe that the influence of celebrities on young people can be both positive and negative.
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