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Nowadays,
there are might be controversial issues on which whether the governments should
impose an enormously tax on fast food that threats people's health of people’s healthy or not. In
this regard, I will disagree about these problems In my opinion, I disagree with this solution.
One
of the primary reasons that the governments should make a policy which imposes higher tax on fast food is because of health problems. Commonly, there are ingredients such
as carbohydrate and fat in most of the fast food and these ingredients helpful
to human body if people eat them of daily recommended intake. However, most
fast food has excessive carbohydrate and fat therefore, some people assume that
eating fast food may result in varied illness such as hypertension and diabetes
so the governments should impose a huge tax for protecting people’s healthy. (이 문단은 대체해주셔야 하는데, 그 이유는 이미 인스턴스 음식에 대한 세금 부과가 논의된 배경이 사람들의 건강 악화이기 때문입니다. 사람들의 건강 악화는 해결해야할 사항이고, 이에 따라 건강 악화로 인해 '더 높은 세금을 부과해야 한다' 는 올 수가 없습니다. '왜' 이러한 세금 부과가 가장 효율적으로 건강 악화를 해결할 수 있는지에 대해 적어주셔야 해요.)
One
the other hand, imposing a massive tax on fast food is may be inadequate to
people because, fast food has greatly changed aspect of people’s life ever
since it was introduced significantly. Fast food is not only be made more quickly fast than
common food but also can be eaten eat quickly so when people are busy, they even can eat
them while walking on the streets. Thus, if If the governments impose a tax on
fast food, people would not be able to enjoy eating them because of the aspect of cost. Also,
imposing a huge tax on fast food could be no not be effective to people. For example,
in Korea, the government had imposed a huge tax on cigarette for people’s
health and the effect had enormously decreased buying cigarette for just 2 years
and then the rate of smoker has been increasing again. (이 글의 핵심은 어쨌든 fast food 이기 때문에, 예시를 들 경우에도 이와 단 1%라도 벗어나서는 안 됩니다.) Consequently, a huge tax
on fast food would finish to collect taxes simply without any effect for health.
In
conclusion, I assume that the governments should restriction on fast food company
that make fast food including excessive carbohydrate and fat. (세금 관련 내용으로 바꿔주세요.)
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