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Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Compared to the past, In modern society, the age of people getting married has increased, so it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. While some people say that this trend is detrimental to society, I personally believe that it is beneficial to society.
First and foremost, in general, twenty (20대로 조금 더 폭넓게 표현해주세요~) is not an appropriate age to raise a baby in all respects. Twenty (여기, 그리고 밑의 thirty 등도 마찬가지입니다.) is the period of that people just start to earn money or adjust at social life, hence they generally don't (풀어써주세요~) have enough ability to getting married and raise a baby. Meanwhile, thirty is the perfect age to get married and have a children for the reasons of that most people start to be stable in their financial or social state. This means that the society need to invest more money if there are a number of people who get married in their twenties than thirties twenty than thirty.
Moreover, society needs the shift of generation in workplaces to work economical circulation well. In general, people retire from their work in their fifties fiftieth, thus if people have their children in thirty, they will quite their job when their children are in the twenties that is the age of beginning social life. That is, having baby in thirtieth is best to satisfy the requirement of society for economical development.
In conclusion, I personally think that having children in thirties benefit society in the respects of the amount of social investment, and economical development.
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