▶ Your Answer :
The data illustrates the information on the proportion of spending
by national consumers in five different nations in 2002. Looking at the table,
it has three categories which are eating, clothing, and extra activities.
The highest expenditure of five countries was on eating section which
includes food, drinks, and tobacco. Turkey had the largest percentage at 32.14,
and Ireland was following behind >> and it is followed by Ireland with 28.91 at 28.91, while the others are just under 20
percent. The second largest part was clothing and shoes section which ranged
from 5.40 to 9 percent. Italy was spending the most on it among them and Sweden
had the lowest percentage. Meanwhile, Turkey, Spain and Ireland had similar
proportion at just under 6 percent. The last part, which includes leisure and education,
seems significantly low and it ranged from only 1.98 percent in Spain to 4.35
percent in Turkey.
To sum up, every five nations
spent the most money on Food, drinks and tobacco and the least expenditure on
leisure and education in 2002. In total, for these three categories, Turkey
spent on these parts the most and Sweden spent the least.
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