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Economic growth is usually the most important aim to many governments. However, I believe that other types of progress are essential like economic progress. There are various benefits of economic growth. Firstly, people can have a more prosperous much prosper life if they are in the country that has good economic status. Also, through that growth, they could also construct much better infra (줄임말을 사용하지 말아주세요~) for every sections, such as public facilities, national systems and etc. For example,. Korea underwent had huge economic growth in 1970. After that, we could build every crucial facilities and infra that we needed. Better economy gave us opportunities to have bigger aims in this country. (여기의 경우도 줄임말을 수정해주시고, 1인칭이 필수인 상황이 아니므로 이 역시 바꿔주셔야 합니다.) For instance, development of technologies, education, sanitations. (여기는 비문입니다. 한국어로 바꿔보면, '예를 들어, 기술의 발전, 교육 등.' 하고 문장이 끊기게 되죠.) However, I firmly believe that other types of progress like educational, cultural development can be essential just as much as economic progress. Educational progress could give a huge impact to this society. Through learning about various subjects, children might gain have diverse dreams and aims in their lives. It can give them new vision, purpose of life, and they can also contribute to their country with their talents. Moreover, education of cultural differences might teach people about understanding and embracing other culture. Nowadays, the rate of multi-cultural family is gradually increasing in Korea. There are many difficult problems related to this issue and this kind of education would play an important role in solution of conflicts. In conclusion, although economic growth can be crucial goal to our (바로 뒤의 I 와는 달리, 여기는 1인칭이 필수인 상황이 아니므로 수정해주세요.) society, I personally believe that the importance of other kinds of progress couldn’t (여기도 줄임말을 사용해서는 안 됩니다.) be mitigated. |