Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Recently, by developing with the development of the Internet, people today can obtain the same products easily in the their own country without (having to go 도 됩니다.)going abroad. As a result, most nations seem indifferent and are changing equally. Some people say that this situation has a have negative effect on advancement of their nations. I agree with the view for the following reasons.
The main Main reason that supports my view is that similar states is not helpful for tourism industry because this leads to extinction of characteristics, on the states. For instance, developing countries continue to (여기에 투자, 제공 등의 동사가 하나 들어가야 합니다.) tourism industry with their unique culture, which brings about advancement of the industry. However, if people nowadays obtain items related to other cultures, the uniqueness would fade out and they would be able to experience various cultures indirectly. A lot of individuals will be uninterested in other cultures. This is obvious that states will be lose the industry and economy would be worsened.
Another reasons is the fall in worth about items since everyone can have equal items. To be precise, individuals these days prefer to represent themselves differently. For this, they use clothes and accessories and consider common items unnecessary, and this prevents consumption from them. This decrease (이런 식으로 작성하면 consumption 이 한번 덜 쓰일 수 있죠.) The decrease of the consumption also may be obstacle of economy development, for one of the crucial factors of the development is circulation of money.
To conclude, I can assume that changing similar nations are not beneficial for economy and tourism industry due to the fact that a wide range of states are losing their own culture and individuals are unwilling to buy same products.
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