As video games developed,(As video games sperad out worldwidely) there are many problems with playing video games especially affecting children. Therefore, parents or guardians who care for (take care of) their boys or girls(children) have many worries about the bad effects of video games. In this essay, I will describe problems of playing video games and And I will also suggest some solutions for preventing the problems. (and로 문장을 시작하시지 마세요)
Video games have many problems. First of all, children spend so much of their time playing video games. Thus, they sometimes forget what they have to do things such as home work, house chores and so on. Moreover, there are many types of video games. Some games have good stories with educational information. But, the others have bad stories with corrupt information. The children who have no sense of choice will be very badly affected. Finally, if children deep dive into the video games, ( if children dive into the video games deeply) they might confuse of the real world with the virtual world.
Here are some solutions to solve the problems mentioned above. First, parents or guardians can regulate their children spending time by giving rules for children.(by making rules or promises) If the children violate (break the rules) the regulation, parents must control their children. Secondly, parents should be able to guide their children to take choose games which have more educational stories. This will protect children from harmful effects of those games. Lastly, parents can help their children by making chances doing other activities.
In conclusion, video games can have bad effect to children. Thus, parents or guardians have to guide their children by preventing game addiction. I believe that this is one of the parents's duty for children.
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