IELTS Writing 캠브릿지8권 Test1 Task1 / 140210 / 19분15초
The figures illustrate the two information parts. First one pie chart shows the reasons of land degradation on worldwide, while the second table shows the effect of that causes on three region, North America, Europe and Oceania during the 1990s.
In first part of these figures, we can see that a third of less productive land caused by deforestation. And this percentage is almost similar that of over-cultivation, with 28 per cent. Over grazing was the most biggest proportion of the reasons with over 1 in 3 of total pie while others were relatively unsignificant.
In second part, how these reasons affected several continents is illustrated. The dominat total land degraded is on Europe while almost half of that proportion on Oceania. In contrast North America recorded only five per cent of land degraded, which is just under 1 in 4 of that in Europe.
Similarly in causes, the greatest proportions of deforestation and over-cultivation are on Europe, with 9.8% and 7.7% respectively. But Oceania have a significant recording on over-grazing 11.3%, and that is almost ten times as likely as that of North America. The other two factors are very small percentage on that region.
Overall, the world wide land degradation have the three main causes. And three region in question have respectively effect from those reasons.
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