■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer : The graph illustrates the popularity of 3 principle languages which students will study from 2020 to 2030. It can be observed that there will be a considerable rise of the number of students who will study English between 2020 to 2024 but the popularity of English will slightly decrease to around 600 million in 2026. Then, it will be covered in 2028 and marginally increase in 2030. There will be almost same number of students who will study Spanish and Mandarin in 2024 and 2026. The number of students who will study Spanish will start at around 200 million and gently grow by 300 million between 2020 and 2030. By contrast, there will be a rapid increase of Mandarin's popularity, starting at 100 million and rising to around 600 million in 2030. Overall, it shows a upward trend of the popularity about three languages between 2020 and 2030, and English will be the most popular language to students in the period. | |
첨삭 부탁 서너번 드리는 동안 인사를 못드려 이렇게 늦게나마 감사드립니다! 쉬운 일이 아니실텐데 하루에 두세개씩 첨삭해주시는 걸 보니 참 대단하시다는 생각이 드네요. 아직 저는 첨삭 한 번도 못받아봤지만, 다른 분들 첨삭된 라이팅 보며 많이 배우고 있습니다. 앞으로 신세 좀 질 것 같아 미리 인사드려요~ 하하;