▶ Your Answer : The chart below illustrates the percentage of the firework injuries in certain situation in 1984 and 1998 respectively. It seems clear that in both years, the accidents in public shows were the most frequent and the incidents while children playing alone were the least frequent. But generally percentages of each situation of incident has been changed in 14 years. As mentioned before, the firework at the public shows look the highest portion in both years, however, it has most decreases among the four incidenences in the charts. It has decreases from 47% to 33% which means 14% plus to this, the second largest portion of this chart has decreased too. On the other hand, the other two factors showed increase between 1984 and 1998. The accidents of fireworks at a familiy party increased from 16% to 28%. Additionally, the percentage of accidents in the children playing alone became more than double in 1998 compared to the percentage in 1984, showing the biggest change among four factors.
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