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The pie chart represents information on the amount of
electricity produced by different sources in Germany and France in 2009.
Overall, Germany used different types of sources to generate the electricity
from France in the year 2009, focusing on conventional thermal rather nuclear
energy. (이 문장은 다시 한번 작성해보시는 걸 추천드립니다. 현재는 독일과 프랑스 간 사용된 자원의 종류에 있다는 쪽으로 작성되었지만, 표가 보여주는 건 그게 아니라 비중의 차이이고 사용된 자원 자체는 똑같죠. 영작 실력은 충분히 좋으신 만큼 다시 작성하는데 크게 문제는 없겠지만, 혹시 모르시겠으면 댓글 주시면 도와드릴게요~) In addition, these counties countries had also different sources for renewables. (이 문장의 경우도 마찬가지의 맥락에서 수정이 필요하겠고요.) When it comes to the Germany electricity generation of Germany,
conventional thermal was the most popular source followed by nuclear and
renewable energy, accounting for 59.6%. Only 23% of nuclear and 17.4% of
renewable were used in the nation. Looking at the renewables in more detail,
biomass took up the largest part with the amount of 39.3%. Interestingly, the
figure for wind was almost equal to that for biomass, amounting to 36.9%.
Commencing with the France electricity generation, France
used the more nuclear energy more than the others combined. To be specific, the
figure for nuclear was 76%, while the figure for the second popular energy,
renwables, registered 13.7%. In terms of renewables, 80.5% of hydroelectric was
used to produce the energy, while the figure for wind only comprised nearly
10%. |