<Topic> The bar
charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a
three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the
city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. What are the best things
about living in London? What are the worst things about living in London?
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The two column charts and a line chart plot the survey
of over three-year period, what are downsides and upsides to live in the city
answered by residents in London. Overall, the
bar charts do not show the significant changes in the good order of the rate and
the people being for 3years in London are more like to tolerate to the three
main problems of the city compared to that of other residents. When it comes to the best things about living in London is, the three largest portions, a range of shops, job opportunities and diversity of people, all indicate more than 35%, The smaller three figures in the chart shows 20-25percent which depict far less than that of the other three, museums and galleries, night life and transport. The cost of
living is the hardest reason to live in London, interestingly, 1st
year residents answered were similar since the rates of cost of living, traffic
jam and crime illustrate mere differences, around 55%. As time went by, 40%
of 2nd and 3rd year Londoners said crime is the worst. It
is noteworthy that the ratios of mixture of people are approximately 30-35%, transport
are 30-25% in the best and worst things to live in London. As of the major
problem in London, people said litter issues are the most significant, moreover,
compared to the 1st year and 3rd year portion (about
70%), 2nd year residents have 5% point more grievances. Air quality
considered the second-worst problem. While nearly 70% of 1st year Londoners
complained, that of 2nd year and 3rd year living residents
are similar (65%). The figure of noise indicates that people had lived 1st
year shows a slight less than 60%, 3rd year people’s portion plot 10%
point less than that of 1st year. |
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