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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are the causes and how to solve it? | |
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In the present society, there are is definite increase in at the rate of young women crimes. In my opinion, several reasons cause these crimes such as too much stress on women, female's social class and so on. On the other hand, there are some solutions I will suggest. In this article, I will discuss about the causes and solutions of young women crimes.
First of all, the reason why the rate of young female crimes has risen is that there seems to be too much stress on women and nowhere to release their stress. For a long time, it is thought that men should work outside to earn the money and women should stay at home to treat their children, clean the house and so on. There seems to both suffer from stress between men and women,(Both men and women suffer from stresses, ) However, there isare a few things to release their stress socially for women . I think, it has caused the increase of young women crimes.(Some women might released their stresses by committing crimes...
Secondly, women's social class has been as same as a men's compare to before ( a woman's social status has became similar with a man's in comparison with the past... When women just stayed at home, there was no possibility to cause a crime( 이렇게 단정지을수는 없으니까요; 뭐, there are less possibility to commit crimes with lots of limitations for housewives.. However, there are lots of females working as a officer s, business women etc in the current society( in the present society/modern times//). It means, more women are facing with dangerous crimes than when most of women stayed at home. It means that more women face more temptations to commit a wide range of crimes in bigger
social communities than before...
On the other hand, there is a solution to alleviate the rate of women crimes. As I mentioned, such things as too much stress and social class cause crimes. In this society, there are many buildings 취미를 즐길수 있는 빌딩들? places...가 낫겟죠 to enjoy our hobbies but these are more for males than females. So, a solution I suggest is to build some buildings only for women.( I suggest that the government should offer more leisure places available for women... ) It could make women to release their stress more effectively.
To summarize, even though there seems to be drastic increase in women crimes, we could not say it only is their fault. If the government pay more attention to women, the rate of young women can be decreased easily. | |
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