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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Write about the following topic ■ Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience ■ Write at least 250 words | |
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Topic :Some people believe that the best time for a person to learn a new language is when he/she is a child. Others feel that adults learn languages better and faster than children do.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. | |
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Nowadays, one of controversial issues is about the appropriate time to when people should start to learn a new language. Some people think that the best time of learning a new language is in childhood, others think differently. These two different ideas have their own ideasHowever, I think that it is important to start learning a new language as early as we can because it has a significant advantage. This essay will discuss both these views and give my opinion.
Firstly, a child can learn languages better and faster than adults do. First, a child is a quick learner of new language. This is partly because they can learn a new language very naturally. Children do not afraid of making mistakes such like pronunciation and grammar in learning language. It will help children to learn a language more easily and effectively, since the process of learning language will require trial and failure frequently. A child's brain is like a sponse that absorbs all the informations and new experiences, leading to learn a new language well enough without any disturbance.. Nevertheless, sometimes a limited knowledge and experience to a child can be a disadvantage in learning a new language.
Secondly, adulthood can enjoy an advantage in learning language. An adult who learn a new language have has? already had a wide range of knowledge and experience through their already learned language and can apply these things to their new languagelearning, because there can be a similarity of between human languages. However, adult learner can face a certain obstacle from their so many hesitations to avoid their mistakes in pronunciation and grammar. In addition, the habits from their mother tongue will make some confusion between the difference of first and second language.
In conclusion, I think that childhood is better timing to learn a new language by having natural learning than adulthood. This point is much valuable than applying already ways with some hesitations.
주장이 childhood에 새로운언어를 배우는게 더 좋다고 할려면,
어른이되서 배울때의 좋은점을 말해도 자연스럽게 마지막 끝마무리는
어렸을대 배우는게 좋다, 그냥 어른때 배우는건 부가설명이 되어야하는데,
뭔가 주장이 흐릿흐릿 하다는 느낌도 받았구요,
처음 인트로에서부터 난 이렇게 생각한다 이렇게 시작해주셨음 좋았을텐데
하는 생각도 들구요,
그래머도 더 신중히 쓰셔야 할것 같네요
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