▶ Your Answer : The given four pie graphs illustrate how the electricity production generated by fuel source changed in different two countries, Australia and France over the period from in 1980 and to 2000. It is measured in units including on five categories. At first glance, both nations had a dramatic changes in electricity generation by certain founts. In the case of Australia, coal was the most leading source at 50 units in 1980 and at 130 units in 2000, with a significant increase during the research years. On the contrary, the amount of electricity created by natural gas dropped dramatically from 20 units 1980 to 2 units in 2000. This trend was witnessed the figures for oil as well, accounting for only 2 units of the total production for the year 2000. In terms of France, the electricity production by natural gas comprised a quarter in 1980, however the amount was merely two units of the whole generation in 2000. This trend was reversed for the figures for nuclear power. Although the production by nuclear power in 1980 consisted of 15 units, the figure soared remarkably to 126 units in 2000, which was as much as eight times larger compared to the figure in the previous research year. According to the statistic provided, the similar trend that can be seen in both countries is that natural gas became a source that was used less the useless source as time went by.
Score: 6.5 Comment: Summarize를 더 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 예를 들어 total production에 대한 정보를 전달 해주시고 그것을 기반하여 specific details를 주시면 될 것 같습니다. 문법상 어순과 띄어쓰게 틀리시고 계십니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |