Many experts have become concerned because there
are so many environmental problems around the world these days. Some people argue
that the main problem is the extinct of some species of plants and animals, but
I personally think that the more significant problems are placed by around the
world.
First of all, it is notable that some
particular species of plants and animals in the Amazone are diminished by
deforestation. These days, people continuely deforest the trees, flowers and
other plants for their own purposes. The loss of these plants eventually leads
to the extinction extinct of particular animals. Also, a decrease in decreasing the amounts of plants in
Amazone causes the lack of oxygen in the world. This shows that the forest and
animals in Amazone now face the danger of extinction. (아마존 자체를 하나의 예시로 드는 것은 가능하지만, 글 내내 아마존으로만 일반화해서 작성해서는 안 됩니다. 그냥 아마존 없이 일반적인 동,식물의 멸종에 대해 먼저 작성하고, 이후 아마존을 예시로 들어주세요.)
Moreover However, other people believe there are more important environmental problems to be handled with., in In the case of the North Pole, such
much ice is steadily melted by uprising trend of temperture in the world. This is
caused by the industrial gas from vehicles or factories. As a result, whenever
the ice in North Pole is melted, it causes drought to the world since the
temperture of the Earth would be increased earth would increased. As this example clearly shows, that there
are more environmental problems such as melting ice and drought as well.
On the whole, after considering those both
views, it is evident that there are serious problems in the North Pole same as
Amazone. Also, these problems would make environmental causes such as extinct
of nature and drought. For these reasons, I firmly believe that people around
the world should try to solve such problems together (해결해야하는지 마는지는 논점의 대상이 아닙니다. 그냥 논제의 두 문제 중 뭐가 더 큰지에 대해서만 적어주세요!)
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