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It is observed that students more prefer to learn from teacher at schools and universities than other resources like the Internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로, 대문자 시작입니다.) internet or television. I strongly agree with this opinion as I think that students need to education from of teachers.
To begin with, students can learn enough thorough other material.First of all, these days, students access on the internet easily. It is because,in comparision to the past ,many companies and institutions offer a various learning resources like distance learning and e-book along with advanced technologies. Therefore, learners can utilize a kind maetrials, information and so on even it can use in free of charge or cheap. Secondly, it is allowed to optimise students' time or money. In other words, if students are educated though on the internet or telelvision at home, it is possible that learn without travelling. Thus, the students who need to move long distance to take classes at school or unviersities would can save their time,energy and money. (여기는 지워진 부분을 대신해서 선생님을 통한 교육을 강조하는 또다른 근거를 넣어주시면 되는데, 자세한 사항은 총평에서 링크를 하나 넣어드리겠습니다.)
However, assistance of teachers is needed to students. First and foremost, it is useful to students for education. (여기서 따로 엔터치지 않습니다. 이것도 점수에 들어가므로 주의해주세요~) It is able that not only learners receive From teachers, learners can receive not only direct feedback about their incorrect information such as pronounciation or grammar but also guidance from teachers.In this respect, teachers should educate their students. In addition, it can be the best way of improve improving the relationship. In process of teaching,there are some communication and interchange between teachers and students. Through these interactions in class, students are likely to learn how to make or develop relationships with people who are older than themselves It is likely to learn making or developing relationship with people who older than students by these interaction in class.
In conclusion, although other materials are is good for learning, I opine that students should receive educate from teachers. |