Everyone should stay in school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, numerous young people think that there is no obligation to stay in school till 18. Some consider they can learn real-life outside of school. While others insist people have to stay and finish school. I totally with the latter idea, since education from school is essential to a human being.
To begin with, I agree with the statement that everyone should enter school and finish their academic journey until graduation. Education plays a vital role in one’s life, and a majority of people treats the school as a small size of the real society since there is a lot in common. One can learn not only academic subjects but also the real world. They can learn an interpersonal skill, by hanging out with friends in the classroom. Moreover, these days in many schools, they put a weigh on the education of humanism as well as academical theory.
On top of that, it is necessary to learn the basic knowledge before going out to real society. To survive in this harsh modern society, this knowledge is essential. For instance, they should know the history of own country, basic science, and so many other things. To learn basic academical notions, schools offer a well-organized curriculum for each step of grades. Moreover, teenagers are still immature to be out of big organization such as school. As being in the school, one can learn and practise the skills before they become real members of society.
To sum up, even though some people consider finishing school is no longer important. However, I firmly believe an educational institute is a huge part in one’s life so that everyone should finish their curriculum, which can help them being a responsible adult in the future.
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