▶ Your Answer : This bar graph compares the quantity of people who visited to three museums over the period from 2000 to 2005. Overall, it can be seen that the number of visitors of National and MET increased steadily. On the whole, the graph shows Edo-Tokyo reached a low recorded the lowest in 2000 and recovered in 2005 it remained to the end of the researched period >> recover는 어떤 것이 높았는데 낮아졌다 다시 올라가는걸 말합니다. Looking at the details 안 쓰셔도 됩니다, MET's visitors started at 12 millions in 2000, and then there was a marked decline to 6 million in 2001>> the number was halved in 2001 이라고 쓰셔도 좋습니다. At this point, the figure remain stable at 6 million until 2002. Then, the figure went up significantly, finishing at around 16 million in 2005. If we look at National, China>> 이런 수식은 처음 언급됐을 때 해주는 것이 좋습니다, the trend was similar. The figure started at 6 million in 2000, and it rose up substantially to around 11 millions in 2003. Furthermore, >> 문장이 길어서 잘라드렸습니다 it leveled out until in 2004. There was then a dramatical jump to around 10 million in 2005. By contrast, the number of visitors of Edo-Tokyo went in the opposite direction during the period from 2000 to 2003, declining to around 6 million from around 13 million. After that, the figure marginally rose marginally to 8 million in 2004, and 10 million in 20005.
완전한 절이 들어가는 자리에 완전한 절을 만드시지 않는 실수가 자주 보이네요 단어를 많이 외우셔서 다양하게 표현해주시고 문법도 다양하게 써서 다양한 구조를 보여주세요 Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 6.0 예상합니다 |