Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in ther important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Nowdays, in our society there are a lot of kinds of jobs even we can't recognize ,and people adore several jobs which can get a lot of money such as doctors and lawyers. However, people don't realize and accept that sports players can be better jobs that can have more powerful strengths in the property when they succeed. There are several reasons why successful sports players can get a lot of incomes than other jobs.
The first reason is that the successful sports players who may have patriotism devote thier all efforts for their contries when there are really important contests in the world. During the big contests, they might be symbol of thier nations, and they do their best to win and show their countries are strong. For example, in 2002 there was the world champonship to the soccer players ,and the Korean team could get one of the valuable prizes in the contest. After korean players did really well, the korean economy and atmosphere were better than before. Therefore, the soccer players could be compencated by the goverment and companies that supported the team with a lot of money.
Not only realizing their purpose in the important contests as symbols of their nations, but also they plactice myriad times even people can't imagine,so the sports players do their best in the physical efforts. They have to do their performances until they satisfy,so they may feel the physical exhaustion. Therefore, they are relatively easy to get serious injuries ,but when they overcome the period when they meet restriction, they can get the great results in the contest. For instance, in Korea one of the skating players who had had serious ankle injuries on her legs became a wolrd winner in 2009 after overcoming her physical and mental obstacles. Because sports players have to do their performances by thier bodies, it is relevant for them to get a lot of advantages in the jeopardous conditions.
In sum, sports players who succeed in their parts can gain tremendous earnings because of their remarkable recults in the international games and plysical damages. Also,companies, goverments and people can get good things such as the economical growth and happiness by the successful sports players after having the biggest contests.
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