▶ Your Answer : The bar graph and table illustrate about students using computers and online facilities in Australian university in 2001 and 2002.
As seen from the chart, the number of students using computers at home showed the highest percentage, which increased about 400% from about 800% in 2001 and 1200 in 2002. however, the rate used at university in 2001 slightly decreased about 200% in 2002. Similarly, the students who do not have computers quite reduced from around 300% to well under 100%.
Moving on to the table, the students number surveyed on this research in 2001 and 2002 were equal total 1600. On the other hand, the students using online facilities (in 2001 1088(68%) showed a considerable rise by 2002 at around 1536(96%), demonstrating upward trend. Moreover, the number submitting work online dramatically increased almost five times by far.(about 320(17%) to 1568(98%))
In conclusion, the number of students using computers and online facilities sharply rose as time goes by.
제이님이 첨삭해주시는거 보면서 같은 실수 하지말아야지 하는데 글을 쓰다가 문득문득 잊곤 하네요^^; 많이 써보고 열심히 노력하면 좋은 점수 받을 수 있겠죠? ㅎㅎ 첨삭 부탁드리겠습니다! |