▶ Your Answer : The chart illustrates percentage changes in average house prices in five cities between 1990 and 1995 and between 1996and 2002, compared with the average prices of house in 1989.
From 1990 to 1995, largely the average prices of house decreased. London and Tokyo house prices declined dramatically by 7%, followed by New York(-5%), compared with the figures in 1989. In contrast, the average prices of house in Frankfurt rose to about 3%, and those in Madrid also increased to 2%.
On the other hand, from 1996 to 2002, there was an upward trend. Especially there was a boom in London real estate market, increasing by 12%, followed by New York(5%) and Madrid(4%). In addition, the average price of house in Frankfurt rose a little, to around 2%. However, Tokyo house prices decreased by 5%, compared with those in 1989.
To sum up, while there was a downward trend from 1990 to 1995, between 1996 and 2002, the average price of houses increased generally, except for Tokyo.
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