▶ Your Answer : Those The given six 6 diagrams show the ratio of usage of water in six 6 areas and the reasons are consist of industrial, agricultural and domestic use.
Overall, the main purpose of using water generally tends to present industrial and agricultural use according to all the diagrams. In terms of domestic use, this ratio charges the smallest percentage in every chart, between 7 and 19 percent. Two third of areas use a huge amount of water for agricultural use such as South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia and also the gap between agricultural use and other reasons in these areas are quite big compared to two different areas. On the other hand, North America and Europe use water for industrial use the most often. When it comes to the cases of Europe and North America, the proportion of agricultural and industrial use seems similar compared to other areas by 9 and 21 percent, respectively. Furthermore, the ratio of usage of water for industrial use is the second main reason in both areas at 39 and 32 percent, respectively.
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