Your Answer ▼ Of late, one of the most significant discussions in a democracy is freedom. Regarding regarding this issue, it, on the one hand, it can be said that there are a range of benefits when people have a variety of choices, it can also be said that the drawback of this issue should not be ignored. The the purpose of this essay is to examine both viewpoints with an understandable conclusion.
There are those with a belief that many choices are positive in many aspects. The primary ground that is clear to see behind their argument is that more and more people are finding it increasingly possible for them to enjoy their freedom, providing that freedom is that people can choose whatever they want in a democratic society/country/nation 등 취향에 따라~ democracy. Another crucial element why they believe the contention that lots of choices are seen as a great contributory factor in providing more of them. (이 문장은 비문임은 확실한데 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) The most compelling evidence of this that cannot be overlooked that people can do a variety of things because nowadays, a variety of foreigners are living in Australia for various a variety reasons, but if they did not have so what if they do not have many choices, they could not come to Australia.
From the other standpoint, others are not content with the aforementioned benefits; they insist that people having a range of choices is are not only negative but also disadvantageous. Primarily, anyone can see that too many choices are associated with crimes, it is no exaggeration to say that every choice is not lawful such as thievery. (이 근거에 대해 조금 더 설명해주셔야 할 것 같습니다. 이것만으로는 딱히 납득이 가지 않네요.) What is also worth noticing is that excessive choice is considered to be affected their life. From the point of view, it follows that they do not know if what are good choices so they might choose bad options in an important situation.
Without going in circles, I am inclined to be of the same opinion that benefits of a range of choices improve human beings' life in democracy despite a few drawbacks of this issue |