Writing Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, in advanced countries the obesity rate of children has been high and this negative phenomenon has occur serious problems in modern society. There are two causes why this negative phenomenon has arisen and this will have a critical impact on modern society.
On the one hand, there are two causes of why children become obese. First fo all, in modern society the food technology has developed. For example, the amount of fast food and substandard food has increased because various machines that make food have developed thus, the producer can produce a large amount of food in a short time and because of these factors, children are likely to become overweight. Moreover, in each household does not educate their children about the dangers of overweight. Generally, most of the children are not medically well aware of the serious effects of overweight on their bodies because they never educated from their parents thus, children do not control themselves to not get be overweight.
On the other hand, the children overweight will occur a serious effect on society. First and foremost, people may have to pay more taxes to treat overweight children. To be specific, it takes a lot of time and money to cure diabetes diseases perfectly and in this process, the government uses a lot of taxes to treat them. Also, overweight is hereditary to their children. Unfortunately, these diseases make it easy for their children to become overweight because genetic factors are very large and if these negative phenomena still continue in the distant future they will have a serious impact not only on their bodies but also on society.
As has been demonstrated, whether there are several reasons why children in developed countries are likely to become overweight and it will occur a serious impact on our society and physically.
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