소요시간 30분
시험일정 4월 18일
목표점수 7점
외부도움 없습니다.
It is a common belief that living in a foreign country where one have has to speak a second-language is likely to cause serious social problems besides practical problems and I totally agree with this opinion.
First of all, the major reason why I agree on that is because it gives rise to discrimination in several ways. To be specific, a person who lives in a foreign country struggles to survive since the new society overseas should would be absolutely different with his or her home country in every way like a whole new world such as education, health-cover system, and regulations that he or she has to follow. In addition, it is no need to mention about the way of think which is also different with her or his. In other words, those who decide to live in other countries have to restart their lives from the bottom, which requires lots of effort and endurance.
Moreover, people who live in a foreign country as strangers could be victims when things get worse. For example, the outbreak of a lethal virus called COVID19 has recently made the world a chaos, causing everyone's fury. As situations getting worse and worse , people started to blast asian because they wrongly believed that Asian asian people had responsiblity of corona-virus. As a result, many Asians asians living in a foreign country suffered from serious violence caused from discrimination. This tragedy would not have happened if they had stayed in their own countries.
To sum up, I personally believe that it is never easy at all to live as an alien overseas in that a person he or she has to adapt to an unfamiliar society from scratch.
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