▶ Your Answer : The pie charts compare the production of electricity from all sorts of resources and renewables in Germany and France in 2009 It is clear that renewable resources accounted for a relatively small fraction of all types in both countries, and there are significant differences between those countries in terms of renewables. In addition, Germany produced more portion of electricity than France, which were 560kWh and 510 kWh respectively. The majority of resources needed for electricity production in Germany was conventional thermal at about 60%, whereas it was just 10.3% in France. By contrast, just over two thirds of nuclear resource was put it into the generation of France but it was used in Germany at only at 23%. Among 17.4% of renewable resources in Germany, hydroelectric was not so much contained, at 17.7%. In contrast While, the figure for hydroelectric in France was the highest proportion of all at 80.5% . The proportions of biomass and wind in the Germany production were 39.3% and 36.9% each, and those had just below 20% in sum in France. However, solar energy had a small fraction and geothermal was not included in both resources.
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