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While some people
think that youngsters should accept and follow advices from old generation, others
believe that they do not have to listen to their words, rather they should
challenge the idea of seniors. (앞으로 이 글이 어떻게 전개될 것인지에 대해 한 줄로 짧게 예고를 해주시는 것도 좋습니다. 물론 점수에 있어 그렇게 큰 변동을 끼치는 사항은 아니지만요.)
The reason why young
people should follow old people’s words is because they are beneficial to adolescents.
The advice comes from the people who already have been thorough numerous trial
and errors living the most of their life, which young people have has not yet
experienced. In short, old generation could be superiors to youngsters in terms
of life. Thus, it is better for young people to accept and make use of the wisdom
of the elderly than to ignore them. For example, especially in a workplace, young
newcomers could be better off accepting instructions of their older superiors
than not following them in order to adapt to the company.
However, some people
are against of older people’s advice because they recognize their advice (문장에 이미 동일 표현이 있으므로 가급적이면 사용하지 않는 게 좋긴 합니다.) as harmful
to youngsters, claiming that it is rather desirable for young generation to escape
from the old ideas and follow their own way. This negative claim towards ideas
of older people originate from the point that the way of older people no longer
fit into the present situation, compared to the past that they had lived in.
Hence, they argue that young people should break the old convention which do
not hold true today, (고득점대에서는 이런 오류 하나도 크게 작용하므로 주의해주세요!)
In my opinion, I believe
that young people should follow advice from older people because it serves them
more benefits (이게 무엇인지에 대해 아주 짧게나마 적어주시는 게 좋습니다. 몇 단어면 충분해요.) than drawbacks. |