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The bar graph gives information on the percentage of people using the Internet in Taiwan depending on according to the four age groups; no more than 15, 16 to 30, 31 to 50 and more than 50 between 1998 and 2000.
The most noticeable feature is that the largest amount were taken by people between 16 and 30 in 1998, (comma) whereas the least amount was shown in the group of the young which are under 15 at the same period, and each value was 53 and 2 respectively.
At the year of 1999, the older people who was were over 50 used to utilize the Internet, occupying doubled percentage than previous year and similarly the rate of people the under 15 significantly increased at to 8. On the other hand, the middle age group was shown a downward trend for the iInternet use. In addition, there were similar patterns in 2000; the rate of the elderly and the children gradually soared with to 9 and 10, (comma) while the number of people aged of 16 to 50 had slightly fallen.
Overall, despite the subtle declines at the proportion of ages from 16 to 50, they were the major Internet users during a two-year period.
SCORE: 5
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