▶ Your Answer :The World Cup or international sports game surely could have a sense of closeness each other. So Therefore, That is >> 축약형은 쓰지 말아주세요 why I agree with this opinion. Firstly, They might do not>> 마찬가지로 축약형 쓰지 말아주세요 know one another before playing sports games. However, by starting the game, they can be able to be interested in a country where matches with against themselves their team and comprehend the opponent. For instance, in case of Korea, they were not well known >> 가운데 - 빼주세요 before having the World Cup held in 2002 but after that, One of the korean players who was in the team could be contacted transfer to the UK team, Manchester United >> 되도록 상세하게 표시해주세요 월드컵에서 항상 우리나라가 유명했던 것이 아니고 2002 년을 계기로 유명해졌죠. Secondly, by releasing international competitive games, They can be able to have a patriotic unity on their own. For example, when they win at international games, they can be proud of their country. On the other hand, some of the countries which lose at in popular events could have international animosity toward counterparts. However, it is only a few people. In conclusion, I think what international something has is a very good way to develop their patriotic emotions and good chances to get understanding each other.
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