Over the past few decades, many students wanted to work or go to journey between finishing high school and starting university studies. Some people have begun to feel that the experience of twenties is essential fact for their life. However other people believe that it is better to travel or work when they are old when after graduate university or during university times.(→ later time like during university times or after graduate university.)

 In this essay, we will discuss both merits and demerits in detail.

There are lots of beneficial (→benefits) of travel and working between finishing high school and starting uni studies .(→univercity) To begin with,(뒤에, 다른 이유가 나오지 않으니 to begin with는 안쓰는게 낫겠네요)  they can get a experience (→experiences) from a journey or work. For instance, if they are an adventurous person, they will learn ability of acclimation themselves from their experience between the period before entering the university. (→ through their kinds of advanture like new people, place, life in jouney or work, they can get ability of acclimatione themselves from that very experiences.)

It is good chance to learn how to get along with others. For the reasons, they can having a various experience (→can have various experiences)before starting University studies.

On the other hand, Many people claim that students should prepare their study for University subject before entering into University. If you go to travel or work, you can't prepare(+ your subjects ) and you will be not interesting University major than prepared people. (→ you might not be interested in University major as much as prepared people).  In addition, you can go to trip or work during University time or after graduation that finishing all of the studies (+not that time) It is more convenient when you go to travel or work. (+Besides the later time might be more convenient for travel or work because of your status like age or financal ability.)

As discussed above, we are now know about a beneficial point and weak point of early travel(or work). In my opinion, it is better to go to travel or work when (빼기) between finishing high school and starting University studies because they can get lots of experience. I also think students who have experiences are more activity when they enter into University.