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In the modern society, it has become a trend for young generations to have a gap year for travelling or working before they start further studying at university. However, several controversies and debates have come up regarding this trend since the one-year gap has the both positive and negative aspects. From my perspective, the benefits coming from a gap year outweigh its drawbacks,>> 주어가 같을 경우에 콤마 씁니다 빼주세요 장단점 언급하라고 했는데 본인의 의견을 갑자기 나타내는건 이상합니다 and the bases will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand To begin with, there are those who are convinced that having a gap year would disturb further studying at university. To elaborate, during the gap year, they would forget what they learned from high school, resulting in having difficulties continuing studies in the higher education. With rational thinking, when it comes to the flow of study, having a gap year away from continuous studying does not seem efficient.
However, it can be noticed without difficulty that having a year between studies can broaden views of young people. To illustrate, the experiences that young students gain from working in certain areas that are based on their preferences,>> 콤마 빼주세요 would lead them to choose what to study at university. Moreover, by traveling during the gap year, they can become more independent than when they are in high school, >> 콤마 빼주세요and this would help them to be more responsible and mature as grown adults.>> 예시가 하나도 없네요 어떻게 독립적이 되고 어떻게 성숙하나요 moreover는 주장이 더 나온단 부사입니다 본론에 주장 두개는 쓰지 말아주세요
Those aforementioned statements are considered as the clear benefits of having a gap year. Although continuing further studies without any blank seems important, there are possibilites that young people would choose wrong majors to study without a focused aim based on the experiences that gain from the gap year. In this regard, having a gap year can be considered as the necessary and practical period after high school graduation.
In conclusion, based on the arguments mentioned above, I have finally come to understand that while the dark sides of having a gap year are observed, it brings more helpful effects to young people. Therefore, I think the advatages outweigh its drawbacks.
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