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Nowadays, no one would argue that a impact of computers on menkind, making our life more convenient and richer. Yet, it sometimes lead serious problems when it comes with teenagers since they spend too much time on this new technological device. I agree the above statement, in this essay, I insist my opinion with illustrations to support it. First of all, some people believe that computers are useful to educate the teens by using useful websites such as ABC and EBS (Educational broadcast in Korea). They tell that many teenagers easily get various virtual experiences from the internet. It is no doubt that the development of computers has changed the method of education, and in many schools, computers are used broadly for their young students. On the other hand, computers has negative aspects as well. The most common things that teenagers spend on their spare time is computer games. Compare with could make serious physical problems like obesity in adolescent. On top of that, mental problems also are caused by computers. The young students, who are not enough mature to judge which the right thing is, are easily exposed harmful medias such as violent films. Futhermore, because of the easiest way to contact with their friends, the messenger programs, they no longer take the troubles to meet their face to face, which make their social skills weak. According to a recently research conducted ny the United Kindom, communication skills of adults between age 20 and 30 are highly related to how much time they spent on computer messengers and SNS (Social Network Service) when they were the teens. In conclusion, although both aspects have acceptable points in deciding whether computers cause to a severe problems for teenagers, I agree that computers influence harmful effect more for them. Therefore, to minimize the negative effects of computers, it is highly recommended for schools and parents to try to find the ways to use computers usefully and even safely. |